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09/11/06 07:01:08 (2 years ago)
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halliday1
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Fixed the following issues:

Title page:

. In the title- Forecast is misspelled as Forcast.

Preface:

. The content that describes how revisions to the current 1.0 document are

made is missing, i.e.,

Changes in the document use the following mark-up style: new text, deleted text, and [a comment].

. I assume docbook provides tags for editing docs?

List of Tables:

. The name of Table F.1. should be "Grid Mapping Attributes"

Revision History:

. This content is missing. In its place are the revision histories for the

beta versions of CF-1.0. This is not right because the links all point to
the current document, but in the original versions the links point to the
actual beta documents. I think the beta documents as well as the change
files should be ported and maintained in their original html versions. The
revision history for the current 1.0 doc is all that should appear in this
section.

References:

. In [COARDS] the linked title appears at the end rather than at the beginning

of the reference.

. [FGDC] -- Broken link (also broken in original). The new link is

www.fgdc.gov/standards/projects/FGDC-standards-projects/metadata/base-metadata/v2_0698.pdf

. In [NetCDF] the linked title "NetCDF Software Package" is missing.

. In [NUG] the title is last instead of first. The author list contains

"Glenn Davies" instead of "Harvey Davies". The "June 1997" date is
missing.

. In [SCH02] - all the info is there but not in the same order as original.

. In [UDUNITS] the linked title appears at the end rather than at the

beginning of the reference.

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  • cf-conventions/trunk/docbooksrc/coordinate-systems.xml

    r1 r7  
    387387    </para> 
    388388     
    389     <example> 
     389    <para role="newtext"> 
     390    <example id="lambert-conformal-projection"> 
    390391      <title>Lambert conformal projection</title> 
    391392      <programlisting> 
    …… 
    427428    Temperature:grid_mapping = "Lambert_Conformal"; 
    428429      </programlisting> 
    429     </example> 
     430 
    430431    <para> 
    431432      An application can determine that <varname>x</varname> and 
    …… 
    439440    </para> 
    440441     
    441      
     442    </example> 
     443    </para> 
    442444     
    443445  </section> 
    …… 
    459461        one dimensions to variables. Scalar coordinate variables have 
    460462        the same information content and can be used in the same 
    461         contexts as a size one coordinate variable. Note however that 
     463        contexts as a size one coordinate variable. <emphasis role="newtext">Note however that 
    462464        use of this feature with a latitude, longitude, vertical, 
    463465        or time coordinate will inhibit COARDS conforming 
    464         applications from recognizing them. 
     466        applications from recognizing them.</emphasis> 
    465467    </para> 
    466468    <para> 
    …… 
    470472        variable that matches the name of any dimension in the file. 
    471473    </para> 
    472     <example> 
     474    <example id="multiple-forecasts-from-single-analysis"> 
    473475      <title>Multiple forecasts from a single analysis</title> 
    474476      <programlisting> 
    …… 
    493495    p500:long_name = "pressure" ; 
    494496    p500:units = "hPa" ; 
    495     p500:positive = "down" ; 
     497    <emphasis role="newtext">p500:positive = "down" ;</emphasis> 
    496498  float height(time,lat,lon); 
    497499    height:long_name = "geopotential height" ;